英语作文病句
篇一：初中英语作文病句和错句修改
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有“语林啄木鸟”之称的上海《咬文嚼字》编辑部，21日公布了2011年中国出现频率最高、覆盖面最广的十大常犯语文差错。这十大语文差错分别是：
一、社会影响最大的语文差错：“捍”误为“撼”。2011年5月，故宫送给北京市公安局的一面锦旗上，把“捍祖国强盛”错写成“撼祖国强盛”，舆论哗然。
二、最容易混淆的繁体字：復/複。2011年是辛亥革命百年，“光复”一词频繁现诸媒体报章。电影《辛亥革命》中多次把“光復”误写为“光複”。其实，“復”表示还原、恢复；而“複”的本义是“有里子的衣服”，引申指重复。
三、出现在媒体上的重大知识差错：2011年是中国共产党建党90周年，但一些媒体把中国共产党党徽上的镰刀与锤头，误说成“镰刀与斧头”。《中国共产党章程》规定：“中国共产党党徽为镰刀和锤头组成的图案。”
四、灾害事故报道中经常混淆的词语：泄露/泄漏。日本地震引发核泄漏危机，但媒体在报道这一事件时经常将“泄漏”错写成“泄露”。语文专家指出，“泄露”的对象一般是机密信息。而“泄漏”则使用较广，凡是液体、气体等的漏出，应当使用“泄漏”。
五、最容易误用的称谓：村长。媒体在报道当下农村新闻时，经常把“村主任”误称为“村长”。相声小品中也常说“别把村长不当干部”。这是语言运用中的滞后现象。
六、工程建设中常见的词语错误：“合龙”误为“合拢”。2011年7月，杭州钱江三桥发生部分坍塌事故，不少媒体将事故原因归结为大桥在施工中“过分强行合拢”。事实上，“合拢”应作“合龙”。传说天上的龙有吐水的本领，故人们把大坝未合龙时的流水口比作龙口，而把修筑堤坝或桥梁等从两端施工，最后在中间接合，叫做“合龙”。
七、最容易读错的金属元素名称：“铊”(tā)。2011年6月，中国矿业大学发生学生“铊中毒”事件，某些电视主持人在播报有关新闻时，把“铊中毒”读成了“tuó中毒”。
八、使用计量单位时常见的错误：把“摄氏度”分开来说成“摄氏”多少“度”，如“摄氏15度”“摄氏20度”。准确的说法应是“15摄氏度”“20摄氏度”。
九、学生作文中容易出错的引语：“一年之计在于春”。“一年之计”容易误为“一年之季”或“一年之际”。
十、街头商店用字中常见的差错：“家具”误为“家俱”。
初中英语作文病句和错句修改（一）
下面的英语句子不是病句就是错句. 让我们用锐利的眼睛, 一起来找茬吧.
1.We have computer class one week a time.
2.Go into my school, you can see many flowers.
3.There have 100 books.
4.I study there very happy.
5.I usually swimming there.
6.I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.
7.Several hours after, he was surprised.
8.He had to asked the other one.
9.He thought he speak well.
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12.Mr. Li is come from Beijing . He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese. This film is very good-looking .
怎么样,找出错误没有啊. 下面我们来看看要怎么改正吧.
1.I have computer class once a week.
英语中表达频率次数时:一次 once, 两次 twice 从三次开始用 three times ...
2.Going into my school, you can see many flowers.
这里使用动名词going做主语, go 这个动作由后面的you 发出.
3.There are 100 books.
表示某个地方有什么,一般使用There be 的存在句型.
4.I study there very happily.
Study 是个动词,表示动作的程度要使用副词,不可以用形容词happy.
5.I usually swim there.
-ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语.
6.I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.
这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题. 如果单从中文意思来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为:
By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall.
7.Several hours later, he was surprised.
使用after时,不能放在时间表达语的后面.
8.He had to ask the other one.
“Have to do something” 是固定用法 ,不定式后用动词原形.
9.He thought he spoke well.
这个句子属于语法时态的不一致.
10. Mr. Li is from Beijing .
一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词..
11. He studies very hard.. He likes studying Chinese.
首先要区分hard 和 hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词,但在意思上有很大的区别. He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他几乎不工作.这个两个表达相差很大. 其次,be 动词后面不能使用副词.
12. This film is very interesting.
这是一个完全中文式的英语句子. good-looking 一般用来形容人物的.
初中英语作文病句和错句修改（二）
下面的英语句子不是病句就是错句. 让我们用锐利的眼睛, 一起来找茬吧.
13. It is very good to family look.
14. I think we can’t live Internet.
15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.
16. I have a future dream.
17. It can help me to walk on my life road.
18. I think everything must be change a lot.
19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.
20. But I singing not very well.
21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.
22. Almost students use the computer not study.
23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.
24. When I was very small.
怎么样,找出错误没有啊. 下面我们来看看要怎么改正吧.
13. It is fit for family to enjoy.
又是一个中文式的句子,
14. I think we can’t live Internet.
学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网.不改变原意的基础上,我们修改为:
I think we can’t rely on Internet.
15. Most people use the net to send the mails.
这是一个要表达比例的英语句子.学生在这里做了一个中文句子的”强行”翻译.
16. I have a dream about future..
Future 在这里不可以直接修饰dream.
17. It can help me to walk on my life ‘s journey.
“人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不可用“road”来表达。
18. I thi(来自:WWw.zW2.CN 爱作文网)nk everything keeps on changing.
不细心看这个句子,我完全不了解他想表达什么.但从上下文来推测,我想他想表达世事在变化的意思.
19. I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do.
宾语从句要使用正常语序.
20. But I don’t sing very well.
动名词不可以单独做谓语动词使用..一般现在时的句子表否定,如果是实意动词需要有do来帮忙.
21. Tom’s mum didn’t care about him.
Care 是个不及物的动词，不可以直接加宾语。
22. Almost of the students use the computer not to study.
一个句子中间只能有一个谓语动词。
23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.
这是一个中文式表达的句子，按照上下文来看，我们修改为：
Most of people like sending mail in the internet.
24. When I was a little child.
Small 用来形容人的体型和物品体积。这里要表达的“小孩子”的意思。
中学生英语作文写作常用基本句式大全（一）
以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1－2个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this are as follows．
3）The reason for this is obvious．
4）The reason for this is not far to seek．
5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．．
例如：
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s
living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life． There are three reasons for this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2．表示好处
1）It has the following advantages．
2）It does us a lot of good．
3）It benefits us quite a lot．
4）It is beneficial to us．
5）It is of great benefit to us．
例如：
Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．
3．表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）It does us much harm．
3）It is harmful to us．
例如：
However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television．
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb．to do sth．
2）We think it necessary to do sth．
3）It plays an important role in our life．
例如：
Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon， computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
5．表示措施
篇二：英语作文中常见病句
英语病句：
1. We have computer class one week a time.
I have computer class once a week .英语中表达频率次数时：一次 once, 两次 twice 从三次开始用 three times …
2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.
Going into my school, you can see many flowers. 这里使用动名词going做主语， go 这个动作由后面的you 发出。
3. There have 100 books.
There are 100 books.表示某个地方有什么，一般使用There be 的存在句型。
4. I study there very happy.
I study there very happily. Study 是个动词，表示动作的程度要使用副词，不可以用形容词happy.
5. I usually swimming there.
I usually swim there.-ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语。
7. Several hours after, he was surprised.
Several hours later, he was surprised.使用after时，不能放在时间表达语的后面。
8. He had to asked the other one.
He had to ask the other one.“Have to do sth.” 是固定用法 ,不定式后用动词原形。
10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .
Mr. Li is from Beijing . 或 Mr. Li comes from Beijing. 一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词
11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.
He studies very hard He likes studying Chinese. 首先要区分hard 和 hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词，但在意思上有很大的区别。He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他几乎不工作。这个两个表达相差很大。 其次，be 动词后面不能使用副词。
16. I have a future dream.
I have a dream about future. Future 在这里不可以直接修饰dream.
18. I think everything must be change a lot.
I think everything keeps on changing.世事在变化。
21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.
Tom’s mum didn’t care about him. Care 是个不及物的动词，不可以直接加宾语。
24. When I was very small.
When I was a little child.Small 用来形容人的体型和物品体积。这里要表达的“小孩子”的意思。
篇三：初中英语作文病句和错句修改
初中英语作文病句和错句修改
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下面的英语句子都是出自<朗文国际>三册和四册的学生作文, 不是病句就是错句. 让我们用锐利的眼睛, 一起来找茬吧.
1. We have computer class one week a time.
2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.
3. There have 100 books.
4. I study there very happy.
5. I usually swimming there.
6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.
7. Several hours after, he was surprised.
8. He had to asked the other one.
9. He thought he speak well.
10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .
11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.
12. This film is very good-looking .
13. It is very good to family look.
14. I think we can’t live Internet.
15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.
16. I have a future dream.
17. It can help me to walk on my life road.
18. I think everything must be change a lot.
19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.
20. But I singing not very well.
21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.
22. Almost students use the computer not study.
23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.
24. When I was very small.
怎么样,找出错误没有啊. 下面我们来看看要怎么改正吧.
1. I have computer class once a week.
英语中表达频率次数时:一次 once, 两次 twice 从三次开始用 three times ...
2. Going into my school, you can see many flowers.
这里使用动名词going做主语, go 这个动作由后面的you 发出.
3. There are 100 books.
表示某个地方有什么,一般使用There be 的存在句型.
4. I study there very happily.
Study 是个动词,表示动作的程度要使用副词,不可以用形容词happy.
5. I usually swim there.
-ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语.
6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.
这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题. 如果单从中文意思来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为:
By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall.
7. Several hours later, he was surprised.
使用after时,不能放在时间表达语的后面.
8. He had to ask the other one.
“Have to do something” 是固定用法 ,不定式后用动词原形.
9. He thought he spoke well.
这个句子属于语法时态的不一致.
10. Mr. Li is from Beijing .
一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词..
11. He studies very hard.. He likes studying Chinese.
首先要区分hard 和 hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词,但在意思上有很大的区别. He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他几乎不工作.这个两个表达相差很大. 其次,be 动词后面不能使用副词.
12. This film is very interesting.
这是一个完全中文式的英语句子. good-looking 一般用来形容人物的.
13. It is fit for family to enjoy.
又是一个中文式的句子,
14. I think we can’t live Internet.
学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网.不改变原意的基础上,我们修改为:
I think we can’t rely on Internet.
15. Most people use the net to send the mails.
这是一个要表达比例的英语句子.学生在这里做了一个中文句子的”强行”翻译.
16. I have a dream about future..
Future 在这里不可以直接修饰dream.
17. It can help me to walk on my life ‘s journey.
“人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不可用“road”来表达。
18. I think everything keeps on changing.
不细心看这个句子,我完全不了解他想表达什么.但从上下文来推测,我想他想表达世事在变化的意思.
19. I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do.
宾语从句要使用正常语序.
20. But I don’t sing very well.
动名词不可以单独做谓语动词使用..一般现在时的句子表否定,如果是实意动词需要有do来帮忙.
21. Tom’s mum didn’t care about him.
Care 是个不及物的动词，不可以直接加宾语。
22. Almost of the students use the computer not to study.
一个句子中间只能有一个谓语动词。
23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.
这是一个中文式表达的句子，按照上下文来看，我们修改为：
Most of people like sending mail in the internet.
24. When I was a little child.
Small 用来形容人的体型和物品体积。这里要表达的“小孩子”的意思。
从学生在作文中写的英语病句，错句来看，很多时候都用中文的思维来写英语句子。针对这种情况，我们建议学生要多看文章，看地道的英语文章，同时多多储备优美的英语表达句子，这样才能做到拿起笔时，心中有数，肚里有货，才不会生硬翻译句子而弄出笑话了。