出国留学信写作技巧及例文（7页）
出国留学推荐信写作技巧及范文
出国留学推荐信写作技巧及范文
很多学生对于出国留学推荐信中优点和缺点怎么写非常苦闷。
因为大家都知
道一封具有说服力的出国留学推荐信是要具有真实性的， 让学校觉得推荐信可以
客观的评价学生。
如果全是溢美之词就会让校方觉得不真实。
下面应届毕业生小
编给大家总结了如何写推荐信中优点和缺点的注意事项。
【出国留学推荐信中的优点怎么写】
1、客观评价自己的成就，避免赞美过度
推荐信应该表明推荐人对于申请者的动机有一定了解， 并能解释申请者进一
步深造的需要。
很多推荐信把申请者吹成了一个甚至比教授还牛的专家， 就失去
了推荐信的意义，既然已经是大师级人物了，还去留学深造干嘛。
2、插入具体实例，避免堆砌泛泛的赞美之词
推荐信中对于申请者的重要素质和能力要有实例的支持。
作为你的教授， 总
是可以论述你在帮他做的项目中的责任和表现， 而作为你的老板， 怎么会不能说
出你的某一项具体成就呢 ?就像写自述信时一样，拿出一张纸，一边写出自己的
品质，优点，在另一边注明至少一个实例。切记：推荐不是吹捧，所以推荐信的
“装扮”要适度，不能太花哨，太渲染。要尽量用平实可信的语言，增加细节性
的例证说明。
3、转换语言风格和思维角度，增加推荐可信度
自己给自己写推荐信不仅仅是摆事实的问题， 还有一个口吻， 行文问题。
首
先是内容上， 除了补充自己自述中所没有的方面外， 对于一些重要的成就和优点
进行论述时，要从推荐人的角度考虑，切勿简单重复自述信或简历中的内容 ; 其
次是语言风格上， 用词上要注意变换， 不要出现你自述信中常用的习语等， 最后
在推荐信用的纸张、信封、字体、字号、段落等方面尽量避免雷同。
【出国留学推荐信中的缺点怎么写】
1、推荐信里的缺点不能是原则性的
推荐信的缺点不能是原则性的， 原则性缺点包括很多， 比如为人处世、 马虎
大意等等， 这些让人家一看就没有好感的缺点千万不要写。
同时， 在围绕专业的
这部分内容方面，也要注意分寸。例如，说自己很努力，但是专业方面仍然有不
足，学习能力仍然有待加强，这样可以，这是谦虚的表现，同时也侧面写出了自
己的优点。但是，如果说自己遇到挫折就没有耐心，麻痹大意，甚至无法和自己
的合作者一起在专业方面合作等等，这种千万不能要。
2、适当提及自己的“缺点”
一封推荐信如果阐述的完全是被推荐的同学的优点， 不免让人觉得有粉饰之
嫌，如果能恰当地加入一些“缺点”， 不仅能令推荐信真实， 还会通过“似贬实
褒”，反而突出了被推荐人的特殊气质。
例如计算机专业、 数学专业乃至金融专
业的同学， 在推荐信中可以考虑加入这样的词句： “该生有时因为过分专注于研
究工作而难以平衡生活各方面的关系， 这不失为一种美中不足”。
这句话似乎是
在谈“缺点”，但很明显这样的“缺点”其实正是很多专业最渴望的“缺
点”——废寝忘食的工作态度， 从而使得“缺点”也为申请提供了巨大帮助。
我
要提问 提问有奖
3、推荐信里的缺点不要针对自己的专业
可以考虑针对你的专业 , 不注重的地方 , 写一些缺点。比如你以后是要做研
究的, 你就不能说自己没耐心 , 不注意细节，或者以后你是要跟人打交道多的 ,
你就不能说自己不善于和人相处 , 交流等等。推荐信里的缺点不要影响你所学专
业，但是要看起来要真实一点 , 而且不能跟你其他部分写的有矛盾。
在推荐信中
不要用尽所有表现人类美德、 才华和优秀的形容词， 却没有一个具体例证。
在推
荐信中适当提及缺点是非常有必要的， 但是这个缺点最好不要针对自己所学的专
业。
所谓“金无赤足人无完人”， 即便是要申请出国留学， 也不可能把自己说的
是十全十美，那么在推荐信中，如何权衡这一点呢 ?因为推荐信最重要的一个标
准就是真实性，最好的办法就是客观公正，对于优点要大力褒扬，而对于缺点，
也不要太过掩饰，否则会让校方觉得不真实。
出国留学推荐信范文
dear sir or madam,
at the request of university of denver, my student in zhengzhou 19th
high school, i ’m providing this reference, which i hope can be useful
for you to review her application to your undergraduate program.
i have been the chinese teacher and class director in zhengzhou 19th
high school for more than ten years. we are one of the most famous and
high-quality high schools in the whole city, the faculties in our school
are all renowned and highly-experienced. though i ’mrelatively young in
the school, i have lots of experience in chinese teaching and student
managing. i have been titled the outstanding young teacher and
class-director by school and city.
yadi wang came to my class in september XX, the semester she entered
our school. i know she is talent in music. she used to performance flute
in our school activities, such as in talent show. in XX, she passed the
high level test of flute level 8. she loves music that is all her classmates
and school teachers know.
yadi wang had special leadership and friendship in my class. once we
were about to take part in our school ’s drama festival. we were supposed
to play a chinese traditional drama –baimaonu. i analyzed somekey plots
and roles of this drama to my students, and then left all the other works
to their own. yadi wang was in charge of the directing and casting. it
was not an easy job as it may sound. the enthusiasm made everybody ask
for the leading roles, but no one was willing to take these minor ones.
so yadi wang decided to run an audition. bined the performance in the
audition and students ’ actual characteristics, yadi wang assigned
everyone the most suitable role. and then, she divided the crew into
several groups. different groups rehearsed in different places at the same
time. and the leading actors were the strings to connect these groups into
a collectivity. through this way, it saved lots of time, which was the
scarcest thing to middle school students, to get everybody into his role.
and before the final performance, she just needed to call all the actors
together for a preview for once or twice. she has done even better than
i had expected.
another time was in a seminar, weran a debate petition about teacher ’
s professional ethics. yadi wang was the leading debater of the con side.
during the debate, she showed her wide knowledge and eloquence. she used
lots of proverbs, history figures and examples to support her stand, and
every word of her was incisive to get to the point, and also full of humors.
her performance won both her teammates and opponents ’ admiration.
her positivity and versatility also can be found in manyother aspects.
she is ours school ’s famous piano player who is always invited to play
in manyoccasions. she knows the traditional skill of calligraphy writing,
which she has been practicing from very small. during weekends or
vacations, the “holiday working team ” she leads can always be found
doing many munity services. normally, in order to get more students to
participate in class ’s management, the student cadre will change every
semester or two, by student vote. but yadi wang has won all the elections
by now, so she continued to be the monitor from the beginning of our class
to today, and very likely to the graduation. all her classmates have
approbated her ability, characteristics and performance. she is already
a model in the class.
in this reference, i didn ’t mention much about yadi wang ’s grade,
which i believe you can easily find was so outstanding from her transcripts
and her ranking , because i ’d like to give you something that you cannot
find from these documents but i think is equally important to contribute
to her excellence. i do hope, according to my remendation, you could give
her a favorable review. thank you! please feel free to contact me.
sincerely yours
molly yu
chinese teacher/ class director ofxxx 19th middle school
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