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听说的作文

时间:2024-05-23 09:59:13 来源:爱作文网  爱作文网手机站

篇一:看听说作文

【文题再现】

阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。

人的五官很有意思,眼睛两只,耳朵两个,嘴巴一张。两只眼睛都朝着同一个方向;两个耳朵却向着不同的方面;一张嘴巴也许是要人们少说。所以,

听说的作文

有人得出这样的感悟:多看、兼听、慎说。

请你以“看·听·说”为话题写一篇文章。要求:立意自定,题目自拟,文体自选(诗歌除外),不少于800字。

【题意分析】

该题由三个部分构成:材料+话题+要求。对话题作文的审题应把握“三审”原则:

① 审材料,抓材料的关键信息。

话题作文中的材料只是话题的铺垫,其作用是启发我们思考,所以,考生写作时可以用、也可以不使用话题中的材料。

本次作文的话题材料分别从“人的五官、五官的摆设和人的感悟”三方面提供写作思考的情境,以激活想象。考生可以从材料中五官的摆设思考,“两只眼睛都朝着同一个方向”可以理解为目标要一致;“两个耳朵向着不同的方面”可以理解为广泛听取意见,包括不同的意见;“一张嘴巴也许是要人们少说”可以理解为少说、慎说、不乱说。考生也可以参照人的感悟“多看、兼听、慎说”来立意写作。但无论怎样解读话题中的材料,都不能离开话题的范围写作,因为话题中的材料是服务于话题的,材料对话题有一定的限制和指向作用。

②审话题,明确判定话题类型,灵活驾驭话题的内涵和外延。

话题是话题作文的灵魂,立意角度的选择,论证材料或记叙事件的选取、行文思路的把握都必须要围绕话题展开。

本话题“看·听·说”是由话题材料延引出来的关系式话题。话题中的三个动词“看、听、说”分别由两个间隔号分开,组成关系型的话题。考生一定要认真思考“看·听·说”之间的关系,至于将三者理解为并列关系、递进关系、条件关系还是转折关系,是侧重在“看”或“听”还是“说”,则完全由考生自己选择完成,只要文章能将三者的关系写清楚,能自圆其说即可。

③审要求,揣摹命题者的命题意图。

题目要求“立意自定”,即可以从材料思考立意,也可以从话题立意;“题目自拟”,即可以在话题范围内自己拟一个题目作文,也可以用本话题作为题目来写作。

综上所述,以下立意均可视为切合题意:

1.如果做到目标一致、广泛听取意见,而又说到做到,就一定能把事办好。

2.只有多看、多听,才能有发言权(有东西可写)。

3.只有多看、多听、多说,才能提高表达水平(思维能力)。

4.善于多角度地观察,多方面地倾听,才能对事物做出客观的评价。

5.多看、兼听、慎说固然对,但有时更要提倡多看、兼听、敢说

6.要做好工作,不能只满足会说,还要深入社会,视察民情,倾听民意。

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若文章只写“看”,或只写“听”,或只写“说”,总之只写一个方面,均视为偏离题意;若笼统提到“看、听、说”三者的关系,没有将三者表述清楚,则视为基本符合题意;若讲到“看、听、说”三者的关系,但部分内容游离了三者的关系,则视为符合题意。

【优秀例文】

多看·兼听·慎说

自然赋予万物各种本领,无可否认,人是万物之灵。我们用眼观天下之变化,用耳听四方之动静,用口说出自己的见解。然而,光能看、听、说,只代表了你比普通动物高了一个层次,真正的智者应该多看、兼听、慎说!成功也有赖于我们多看、兼听、慎说!

多看让我们视野开阔,积累更多的经验。古人一直崇尚饱读诗书,学富五车,便有“读书破万卷,下笔如有神”之说。然而古人亦关注人生,便有“事事洞明皆学问,人情练达即文章”的至理名言。的确,“多看”不仅要求我们能够博览群书,获取知识,更要留意身边发生的事情,在社会生活上总结人生经验。著名作者沈从文从小厌恶书本与数学,但他却在社会这本大书中积累了许多人生的经验,学到了许多书本无法提供的知识。因为他多看,多关注周围、天下,才大大开阔了视野,从而成就了他的文学巅峰。钱钟书更是“横扫清华,饱蠹牛津”,日夜埋首于图书馆,孜孜不倦阅读了大量的图书,从国学到西学融会贯通,具备现代意识和世界性的眼光,以至后来成为东方睿智学人,名满西方乃至整个世界。可见,“多看”能为成功铺平道路!

兼听让我们明辨是非,更好地走向成功。耳听八方,听的是周围的风起云涌,听的是天下的日新月异。我们在听到的内容中,总能找寻到机会、找寻到问题、甚至找到方法。而兼听,更能让我们明辨是非。所以,在多看的同时,兼听更重要!发现DNA分子螺旋结构的沃森

和克里克在进行研究时,除自己认真试验外,更是广泛听取不同的见解,尤其是认真地聆听了有关DNA衍射的讲座,因此而激发了他们对DNA的兴趣,成就了他们顶上科学高峰的辉煌。著名作者贾平凹在一次获奖感言中说,他写作的素材都是‘道听途说’来的,不同的声音都给他有益的启发。可以看出,这位“茅盾文学奖”得主是何其关注耳闻的东西,又是多么善于对这些听到的东西进行认真思考!看来,多看固然重要,兼听更是有效的补充,它让我们明辨是非,更好地走向成功。

慎说则是成功路上关键的一环。说话头头是道,滔滔不绝固然是成功的利器,出言不慎亦是成功的大敌。古语云:“病从口入,祸从口出。”又说:“成事不足,败事有余。”一言足以招祸,一语足以败事。成功路上须有“慎说”相伴。谨慎于言语,是成功者的共性!周总理一直以口辩受人称颂,他充满睿智、饱含哲理的话语总能体现一个大国领导人的气度!而慎于言语的智慧又使他在外交场上游刃有余。慎说既使你的才华充分展现出来,又不至于出言不慎,招惹是非。慎说,真正的成功者的风范!

我曾听过这样的见解,“聪”字是“耳”(多听)、“八”(多看)、“口”和“心”(谨慎地说)组成的,拥有这一份聪明,何愁办事难成?

成功路上,请记住古人巧妙地留给我们的忠告:多看、兼听、慎说!

【简评】

本文从“成功有赖于多看、兼听、慎说”这一角度展开论述,紧扣“多看、兼听、慎说”对成功的重要性行文,文章结构清晰,内容充实,语言流畅。如能在“多看”和“慎说”部分对“看、听、说”三者的关系表述得更清楚些就更好了。(点评:广东实验中学 邓翅跃)

多看·兼听·慎说

广东实验中学高三(18)班 谭理欣

鹰击长空,鱼翔浅底,那是眼观六路之敏锐;

豹行似病,鹿藏幽深,那是耳听八方之智慧;

寒蝉无声,桃李无言,那是声应天时之谨慎??

人从茫茫自然走来,天然生就眼睛一双,耳朵两个,嘴巴一张。上苍造物的“神来之笔”是否昭示我们:擦亮眼睛去观察,竖起耳朵去倾听,管好嘴巴慎言语?历史与现实给了我们最好的答案!

善于发现,多看则悟。雕塑家罗丹说:“世界不是缺少美,而是缺少发现美的眼睛。”史铁生流连在地坛的残垣断壁和荒草野地深处,观察着,思考着,悟出了生与死的真谛;朱自清徘徊于那一方荷塘,沉醉于那一抹月色,悟出了喜与悲的精髓;孟德尔潜心观察院中的豌豆花,

从其高与矮,黄与绿中研究出遗传定律;法布尔用心观察各种各样,奇形怪状的昆虫,撰写出有趣易懂的《昆虫记》。

眼观六路者,才能发现生命的美好与奥秘!

从善如流,兼听则明。古人云:兼听则明,偏听则暗。兼听者获得成功,偏听者难逃失败。楚汉之争,可谓激烈,汉王刘邦善纳雅言,兼听韩信、张良等人的妙计,于是明修栈道、暗度陈仓让汉王出奇制胜,运筹帷幄,决胜千里成就汉王辉煌。而霸王项羽刚愎自用,置范增等人的建议于不顾,优柔寡断,终使霸业成空。唐太宗李世民坚持以人为镜,从善如流,谱写出一曲贞观长歌,而秦始皇却以独夫之心奴役天下,师心自用,终于自掘坟墓,以致万世基业二世而亡。成败异变,全乎“兼听”二字!

耳听八方者,方能博采众长,集众人之智慧,铸时代之辉煌!

人仅有一张嘴,当说必说固然可以显示出胆略和魄力,宜闭则闭更可以表现出理智与谋略。射出的箭儿难转头,说出的话儿难收回,说的就是要慎言。慎言并非胆小怕事,逆来顺受。冬天的沉默孕育了春天的绚丽,雄鹰的沉默昭示着积蓄的力量,“桃李不言,下自成蹊”,真正的智者不会信口开河,口无遮拦,逞一时之口快,而是审时度势,深思熟虑,出言谨慎。在风云变幻的外交场合,周恩来总理的慎言表现出优雅的风度,也争取到外交的胜利;面对远道来访的外国著名作家,“横扫清华,饱蠹牛津”、澹泊宁静、毁誉不惊的一代奇才钱钟书,仅以一句“如果你吃了一只鸡蛋觉得味道不错,难道一定要见到那只母鸡?”巧妙而幽默地婉拒,也向人们诠释了何谓“文化昆仑”。

慎言,尽显人生智慧。

一双眼睛、两个耳朵、一张嘴巴,这样巧妙的搭配集中在我们身上,能给我们什么启发呢?多看则悟,兼听则明,慎言则智!在这绚丽多彩、纷繁复杂、变幻莫测的世界中,只有用心观察,用心倾听,谨慎言语,才能不断有所发现,博采众长,达到“知明而行无过”。

【简评】

本文突出的优点有:文章一气呵成,自然流畅;语言生动,颇有文采;材料丰富,内容充实。如能将“看、听、说”三者的关系表述得更清楚些就更好了。(点评:广东实验中学 邓翅跃)

观察·滤听·巧言

广东实验中学高三(1)班 钟靖

人有两只眼睛是为了多看吗?有两个反方向的耳朵是为了兼听?一张嘴巴是为了让人慎说?

不,我不赞同。

同向的双眼,并不意味着毫无目的的多看,而是引导人全神贯注地观察事物。

春秋战国,战火纷飞。一声简短有利的“未可”,让大军追击的步伐戛然而止。沉默的智者注视着落荒而逃的齐国大军,目光像利剑一样穿透齐师的心脏。再是一声“可矣”,同样地简短有力,大军终于吹起追击的号角,像兽群一样汹涌地扑杀齐师。是什么让曹刿在短短时间由怀疑转为肯定呢?是“视其辙乱,望其旗糜”。曹刿的目光集中到了齐师的旗和辙上,全神贯注的观察和思索让他顿悟:齐已完败,可以逐之!是专注,是观察使他走到最终的胜利,把握了最佳的时机。

双眼同向,我们正巧把所有的专注集中到一件事物读透他的内涵。观察,象征一种有目的专注的挖掘。

反向的双耳,并不意味着无所扬弃的兼听,而是惊醒人要懂得取舍地滤听。

世人常说阿斗,玄宗亡于听信谗言,而汉唐之初的一片昌盛则全赖于有明君明臣。此言差矣。难道刘后主满朝之中,竟找不出一个像样的精忠之臣?难道唐太宗皇宫之内,竟不存在一个阿谀奉承的卑鄙(注:原文“鄙”字写错)小人?言者有意,听着亦有心。明君的成就赖于他本身的能过滤身边之言,懂得滤听,辨其真伪,取其所真。广开言路自然是原因之一,然而在繁杂的言论中过滤出真实有益的部分,才是重中之重。

双耳的反向,在于过滤。古人讽人以“左耳进,右耳出”,但在我看来,此话本意,应是取左右耳反向之形,述过滤言论取其所需之理。

唯一的嘴巴,并不意味着胆小怕事的慎说,而是倡导着人要大胆地巧言。

试想,如果少了邹忌以自身与徐公竞美的暗讽,怎么会有齐王最后的广开言路,振兴齐国?如果少了“不鸣则已,一鸣惊人”的暗中激励,怎又有楚国 的抛弃酒色,成就霸业?

一张嘴巴注定了不能多说,但正因如此,我们才应尽其所能,巧言以达奇效 。

观察﹑滤听﹑巧言,三者结合,便是一种睿智的人生态度和哲学。如果我们能看透三者的妙用,谨慎施行,也必将提高人生攀登的海拔,不负上天造出眼耳嘴三者的良苦用心。

【简评】

本文观点明确,结构清晰,行文较有气势。善于灵活运用课本材料是最大特色。对人物的描写也较为成功。(点评:广东实验中学 谢家祭)

五官访谈录

篇二:听说作文

As we all know,not everyone has access to the success,but all of us have chances to pursue happy life which is defined differently by everyone.And in my opinion,a successful career can be with a happy life.

On the one hand,people who succeeded mostly have a brave heart and positive mind which are of most integral factors to lead a happy life.Wang Shi is a typical example,As the founder of Wanke Company,he founded and managed it for about 30 years so it grows up to the top companies in China.Though tired, he continued working hard to lead Wanke to be stronger which can prove many feelings of achievements for him.And when older,he chose to challenge himself to climb mountains and study in Cambridge University.Thanks to the brave heart and positive mind,Wang has experienced much about colorful life which means happy life.

On the other hand,only successful career can bring special feelings called the sense of achievement.Mark Zuckberg,the co-founder of Facebook agree about it.His final dream is to connect everyone in the world rather than just make money.The fantastic dream gives the special feelings though it is hard to be done.Zuckberg gets the satisfactory and enjoyment of life by pursuing a successful career.

In short,life can be full of happiness with a successful career if you have a brave heart and positive mind.Thus the success itself can lead your life to the land of happiness.

篇三:作文之看听说

阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。

人的五官很有意思,眼睛两只,耳朵两个,嘴巴一张。两只眼睛都朝着同一个方向;两个耳朵却向着不同的方面;一张嘴巴也许是要人们少说。所以,有人得出这样的感悟:多看、兼听、慎说。

请你以

“看·听·说”为话题写一篇文章。要求:立意自定,题目自拟,文体自选(诗歌除外),少于800字。 不

篇四:英语视听说小作文

一.电影 Braveheart is a 1995 American epic/drama film directed by and starring Mel Gibson.The film was written for the screen and then novelized by Randall Wallace. Gibsonportrays William Wallace, a Scottish warrior who gained recognition when he came to the forefront of the First War of Scottish Independence by opposing King Edward of England (also known as "Longshanks", portrayed by Patrick McGoohan), and subsequently abetted by Edward's daughter-in-law, Princess Isabelle of Franc and a claimant to the Scottish throne, Robert the Bruce. The film won five Academy Awards at the 68th Academy Awards, including the Academy Award for Best Picture and Best Director, and had been nominated for an additional five.

William Wallace: Every man dies,not every man really lives.

华莱士:每个人都会死去,但不是每个人都曾经真正活过。

William Wallace: Fight and you may die,run and you'll live. At least a while. And

dying in your beds many years from now,would you be willing to tradeall the days from this day to that for one chance,just one chance to come back here and tell our enemies that they may take our lives,but they'll never take our freedom?!

华莱士:是呀,如果战斗,你们可能会死。如果逃跑,至少还能……多活一会儿。年复一年,直到寿终正寝,你们愿不愿意用这么多苟活的日子,去换一个机会,就一个机会。回到这里,告诉我们的敌,他们也许能夺走我们的生命,但他们永远夺不走我们的自由。

2.偶像

Zhou Xun (October 18, 1974 -), Quzhou, Zhejiang, China, the famous actress and singer. Graduated from Zhejiang Art School. In early 1991, Gordon starred in big screen debut, "Tomb shortage Studios." Starring in 1998 the sixth generation of China's famous director Lou Ye for "Suzhou River", won the 2000 Paris International Film Festival Best Actress title, the film has received awards recognizing the first film. 1998-2000 has starred in "Palace of Desire," "like a fog, like rain and like the wind" and other popular TV shows, access to domestic film and television industry and the audience wide recognition. Around 2000, and Zhao Wei, Zhang Ziyi, and Xu Jinglei and the four major artistes. Block 13 has been the best actress actress; two Best Supporting Actress Award. So far Zhou Xun as Chinese-language film industry in the first sweep of the three places after the top film

awards in film title person. 周迅(1974年10月18日-)中国浙江衢州人,著名女演员、歌手。毕业于浙江艺术学校。1991年初登大银幕出演处女作《古墓荒斋》。1998年主演中国第六代导演娄烨的成名作《苏州河》,获得2000年巴黎国际电影节影后桂冠,得到从影以来首个电影奖项的肯定。1998年至2000年先后出演《大明宫词》《像雾像雨又像风》等热门电视剧,获得国内影视界和观众广泛肯定。2000年左右与赵薇、章子怡、及徐静蕾并称为四大花旦。已获得13座最佳女主角影后;两座最佳女配角大奖。至此周迅成为华语电影界中第一位包揽两岸三地最高电影奖项影后桂冠的人。

she is a very beautiful young girl who has the big eyes and little nose . her month is also good-look. but she is a little short like a child. everyone who ever saw her said she is lovely as the queen.

3地方

About Heze

Heze city of Shandong Province is located in the southwest, and Jiangsu, Henan, Anhui, which borders the three provinces, Peony jurisdiction areas, Cao, Dingtao, Cheng-wu, a single county, Juye, Yun City, juancheng, Dongming County, one of eight provincial areas and a Economic Development Zone, the population of 8,810,000, with an area of 12,239 square kilometers.

Heze has a long history, rich cultural. Heze known as "among the world", has been

appearing in the Central Plains region has become an important political, economic and cultural center. Legend has it that Yao, Shun, Yu, and other well-known clan of the main activities of the tribal leaders in the region, the history of the famous Yiyin politician,

military strategist Sun Bin, Zhou thinkers, the proliferation agronomist beat them, Liu Yan's economist, writer Atsuko upgraded a large number of saints, all born here, "originator of the business" to do business Fan Li, Liu Bang Dengji proclaim oneself emperor,

Chengjiubaye Cao Cao, Huang Chao Uprising, Song Jiang Ju Yi, have taken place in Heze. Yao still inside the King, Chi You Tsukamoto, Tai Chen, Fan Li Lake's Hometown Sun Bin, Qin summer more than 100 holes, and other historical sites. Peony is a well-known town, Shuhuazhixiang, opera and martial arts of the rural town.

Heze superior location, sound infrastructure. Located in the eastern and western regions of the transition zone, the east coast ports, even the West Central Plains hinterland. Beijing-Kowloon Railway and the New Eurasian Continental Bridge in Heze were "ten" intersection, 105,106,220,327 four in the national territory through, have been completed and the opening of the sunshine - high-speed east-ming, is the building of Jinan - Heze, Heze - Kaifeng High-speed, is about to start the construction of Texas - Shangqiu, Dongming - Xinxiang, Xuzhou - Heze high-speed formation of the "m" type of large land transport hub. Ports, customs, seized the country, the foreign container shipping center, and other agencies fully realized with the Qingdao port in Hong Kong through train, finance, insurance, communications and the rapid development of trade circulation, urban water, heat, gas, sewage treatment facilities Complete, the building has taken into Huacheng, water for the town to highlight the characteristics of urban forest plain. Heze is rich in resources, and broad prospects for development. Yellow is an alluvial plain, flat, fertile soil, natural conditions for agricultural production, the country is well-known high-quality grain and cotton production base for animal-lam, three national livestock market in rural areas and the green plains of the first four target areas. The territory of 28,100,000,000 tons of coal reserves, is the development and construction of the Juye coal field in east China is the biggest, best and final piece of coal field; oil and natural gas proven reserves of 56,250,000 tons, 273 billion cubic meters of Zhongyuan Oil Field has become an important production Base. Good industrial base has been formed to electrical, mechanical, chemical, pharmaceutical, food, textile, processing of forest products-based, relatively complete categories, supporting a strong ability to collaborate industrial system. And more than 120 countries and regions established economic and trade relations,

chemical products, fur clothing, food fruits and vegetables, such as wooden handicrafts in the international market is relatively competitive. Heze, Shandong Province has been identified as priority to the development of high-quality agricultural production and processing bases, energy and chemical industry base and trade logistics base.

篇五:作文之看听说范文

若笼统提到“看、听、说”三者的关系,没有将三者表述清楚,则视为基本符合题意;

若讲到“看、听、说”三者的关系,但部分内容游离了三者的关系,则视为符合题意。

观察?滤听?巧言

人有两只眼睛是为了多看吗?有两个反方向的耳朵是为了兼听?一张嘴巴是为了让人慎说?

不,我不赞同。 同向的双眼,并不意味着毫无目的

的多看,而是引导人全神贯注地观察事物。

春秋战国,战火纷飞。一声简短有利的“未可”,让大军追击的步伐戛然而止。沉默的智者注视着落荒而逃的齐国大军,目光像利剑一样穿透齐师的心脏。

再是一声“可矣”,同样地简短有力,大军终于吹起追击的号角,像兽群一样汹涌地扑杀齐师。是什么让曹刿在短短时间由怀疑转为肯定呢?是“视其辙乱,望其旗靡”。曹刿的目光集中到了齐师的旗和辙上,全神贯

注的观察和思索让他顿悟:齐已完败,可以逐之!是专注,是观察使他走到最终的胜利,把握了最佳的时机。

双眼同向,我们正巧把所有的专注集中到一件事物读透他的内涵。观察,象征一种有目的专

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